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NOOT NOOT

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Critique My Work Stamp by SparkLum

third and final commission for the wonderful Coffeecatmc ;v; i hope i got all of the fur details right! sorry for not sending any WIPs of this, but if there's anything i got wrong, just let me know and i'll be glad to fix it for you! c: 
i really hope you like it, and thanks so much for buying all the commissions, and being so great through this entire process! i really do appreciate it c:
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I love the fur texture, it looks very realistic. It looks like you have taken the time to elaborate the fur, good job on that. What I don't like is the overall anatomy, I feel that you did not look at a reference photo while drawing this. The head looks a bit off, the ears need to be a bit smaller. The back has a light slope which is odd for a cat. They usually hunch their back a bit while lying. The back right paw looks a bit odd, too, maybe because it's too small. I also feel that the cat looks a little bit like a canine here, maybe because of the thick tail. It needs to be a little longer and thinner for a cat.
I like the eyes though, they look lively. Overall I suggest that you collect as many reference photos of the subject as you can and do quick sketches before you go into the details. It will be very useful to make a better impression on the viewer.