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Walking On Sunshine

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Second commission for Coffeecatmc c: thanks so much for commissioning me, and i really hope you like it! and thanks everyone for being so patient with waiting for commissions and stuff c: i promise i'm working hard on them! 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okay, please don't be mad at me or kill me for giving you a not-so-ideal score. I am a tough critic and expect to get the same treatment back (if I want to be fair). Firstly, I really like how much detail you put into the fur, but it looks kind of plastic (maybe because of the brush you used). There is a lack of contrast between the hairs and they seem to be too "perfetly" organized for an animal. I also think the snout is a teensy bit too big. The tip of the snout should be aligned with the eye. I love the hair though! I gave you such a score in originality and impact cause the cat seems a bit bland, usual. The inside of the ear should be dark pink and the hairs should flow a little more upwards than on the back of the ear. Hope I helped and that you're not mad for such a score! After all, it did catch my eye when I was scrolling through the critique folder.